Monday, February 25, 2019

The olden days school

The  Olden Days School

The groan of the crooked door entering the apartment was ghastly. The seats all broken . No tables at all. The piano sat quietly, patiently waiting to be played.  The piano tiles felt rough and worn.The board stand was lying on the floor. I would not be able to see more, it was time for me to go home. “Ahhhhhhh there on the floor was a monstrous  hole!” I blared as I ran out. It was a misadventure .

Death trap,aged and hazy ………………….I was about to  fall into the Nethermost divot.
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 11, 2019 at 6:53 PM

    I liked how you used adjectives and I could really make the picture out in my head.
    But maybe try to use similes next time.

    by Tunde

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  2. AnonymousMarch 18, 2019 at 6:43 PM

    Great writing Fariah! I like all your describing words. Maybe next time you could make it longer.

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